I found this section very hard to plan and write, I think this is because of the sheer volume of things there is to say about it and the divisions between more modern and ancient legacies. This meant that there are lots of separate intricate arguments leading into the major one of - does Alexander deserve to be known as great because of his legacy - which created difficulties when writing and I am aware that it may not flow as smoothly as other sections. I have since re read it and I am satisfied with it, however I do feel that when I proof-read this is a section that I need to pay particularly close attention to. From this I have learnt that whilst intricacies in the argument add depth it does make them difficult to write which makes it even more essential to have an overall argument, so it is not just lots of little arguments with no cohesion. This is definitely something I shall keep in mind when I am in the editing stage of my dissertation.
However I am happy with the majority of it, especially the paragraph on how Alexander influenced other individuals because it shows how significant his legacy is chronologically if it didn't just impact on the ancients.
I am mostly happy with this section and I have learned something from it in terms of ensuring that there is cohesion between all points in a dissertation to make it read smoothly and have clarity, but I believe this is something which will be more challenging with this section than the others so more time should be spent on it when considering this.
However I am happy with the majority of it, especially the paragraph on how Alexander influenced other individuals because it shows how significant his legacy is chronologically if it didn't just impact on the ancients.
I am mostly happy with this section and I have learned something from it in terms of ensuring that there is cohesion between all points in a dissertation to make it read smoothly and have clarity, but I believe this is something which will be more challenging with this section than the others so more time should be spent on it when considering this.